- include a generic historical overview within the introduction
- how was a patriacrhal societ affected representations of women?
- create a hypothesis of how and why things are changing in the 21st century
- media effects
- globalisation
- include more critical debates
- regulation and censorship
- ownership - ASA
- use the idea of zeitgiest
- research the feminist theory in detail and relate to more media concepts
- historical links as well as current links using texts as examples
- find 3 more books to get quotes from
- analyse texts using key concepts in more detail relating them to wider contexts
- especially, political and social aspects
- in foot notes and bibliography, make the title of book or website in italics
- footnotes - take out the web address
- use ibid
- consider re-structuring the essay
- intro
- historical texts
- dominant and alternative ideoligies
- relate to texts (coty lipstick, young love etc)
- feminism theory (movement)
- 21st century texts (rihanna, beyonce, lily allen etc)
- dominant and alternative ideoligies
- media effects - ASA, sexualistation, aspiration, globalisation, regulation
- effect on economy - revenues, celebrity endorsement
- continue to weave in theories and textual analysis round texts
- Overall, aim to write a more sophisticated CI with careful thought to structure, in depth content and making it more concise.
